This is the basic jist of my first Research Proposal..."Why isn’t anyone standing up and saying something, if everyone feels the same way that I do about this place?" I think I might know some reasons why but I'm not ready to reveal my conclusions until I know for a fact that they are concrete.
I have the answer but I am not ready tp reveal it because I know it will ruin the paper, and I can't risk that, I'm sure that you probably already know the answer but it will sound a whole lot better mot repeated but only said once and thats in my essay which I have started to conduct, I feel it will be one of my better writings, though I will not be too original with my words because I have already wrote much of my paper in my blogs, I still feel that with all of my hard work and researh I will still make this very interesting for you to read.
I also took what you said into deep consideration. I have took the liberty and talked to a few people who didn't work at the resturant and asked them about there uncomfortable working conditions and how they handle it. My mother works at FORD and as you know FORD is going threw a very hard time and is cutting a lot of people's jobs, luckly my mother has kept her job aswell as my step-father. Everyday my mother goes to work and she works knowing that she could be fired at any moment and there isnt a thing she can do about it. She says that it's a very scary thing having 2 kids in college and only being 50 she worries about herself when she one day will want to retire. I try to be there for her but only she and her other co-workers can really know how that feels, to put so much time and years into a job and then be stabed in the back. When I worked at a movie-theater I dedicated 2 years there (would have been more if I could) and out of no where the place went out of buisness and they told us 3 days before so that we would work out the rest of out shifts...i felt betrayed it was a horrible day. I also looked into my researching on cults like you mentioned and found many answers. I know now how to answer my question but once again I will wait, trust me when I say I am confident about this and I am on the right track.I am glad you like the question as much as I do.
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I love that you don't want to ruin the essay for me by answering the question now, and I am completely confident that you are on the right track, and will produce a focused, insightful essay. Once again: don't worry about repeating what you've said in your blog writing, because the point of the blog writing was that it would develop into your LE2. So I completely expect that you will be using many of the ideas and the writing that you posted in your blog to write your LE2.
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